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Here’s a cool twist on the usual vampire fiction from a fellow WriMo K.Orion Fray.
After discovering their writing vlog on Youtube way back in 2010, I was heartened to find Son of the Revolution was their 2009 NaNoWriMo novel. Which gives me motivation to get some of my NaNoWriMo first drafts edited and published.
Have a wander over to their blog I am not lost… for indie book recommendations and reviews, as well as some older writing extracts inspired by observations working in a coffee shop. Fray is skilled at capturing human interaction with a few lines of dialogue & subtle moments between characters. I look forward to reading more of their work.
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
Son of the Revolution is an original take on the vampire mythos. This dystopian vampire novel is a slow-burner. There are no one-dimensional sparkly vamps here, it’s all about the characters. Alistair and his group of friends are ordinary folk (albeit with fur or an aversion to sunlight ) doing their best. The author pulls on issues facing real life otherness as characters battle prejudice from society, and often their own families. Alistair fights an internal battle over what he has become and his past mistakes, while trying to stop those in power who would seek to destroy his kind.
The feel of the novel is low key and realistic. Here the fight is lost and won in bars, warehouses, back streets. While there is plenty of exciting action & blood shed throughout, this is not an all-guns-blazing superhero battle.
I love that these vampires have to earn their powers, which seem to elude most but the oldest or most powerful. Turning into a bat, mind control, day walking comes at a price. Most vampires struggle to get enough blood to sustain them day to day, and stop from turning into the bloodthirsty creatures some make them out to be.
My only niggle is that I had to suspend disbelief a couple of times. Alistair has means to save himself but does not think to use it, and an ally turns up by coincidence at just the right time.
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. The characters are portrayed as realistic and fragile despite their supernatural state. I was truly wondering if they would make it against such great odds, and was left on the edge of my seat right up to the end.
An enjoyable introduction to Kristen Martin’s YA Dystopian trilogy.
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
Alpha drive is a solid debut novel from Kristen Martin. I enjoyed the fast paced action scenes, and the Matrix inspired plot.
Alpha drive would appeal to adult or older teen readers wanting a quick sci-fi / dystopian read, as well as YA readers who’d enjoy a contemporary novel with a twist.
According to the author, Alpha Drive started life as a NA contemporary novel, which was then rewritten as a YA Dystopian. This novel does seem to straddle a line between the two.
The main characters fit more in the NA age group. The setting seems to be a college/ uni, rather than a boarding school. Emery drives a car, has a long term relationship with her boyfriend, and drinks alcohol in a club.
The writing style and plot is clunky in places, but the story kept my interest with its Matrix inspired theme.
I enjoyed this book for what it is-a quick, fun read. I will be reading the rest of this trilogy to see how the story develops.
I’m looking forward to reading more of Kristen Martin‘s books. I will finish The Alpha Drive trilogy as it should be a fun sci-fi fix. I am thinking that her dark fantasy Shadow Crown series will be more suited to my taste.
Kristen has a YouTube channel, which I watch for her useful writing advice and vlogs.
I also enjoy listening to her podcast That Smart Hustle while doing my morning workout. Kristen’s upbeat, motivational, common sense thoughts on life and writing are a great way to start the day.
For some time I had been wanting to have a coaching session with E J Runyon at Bridge to Story. One of my writing buddies had been coached by EJ while writing her debut novel, and told me how much the coaching had helped develop her work. I checked out the Bridge to Story website, and tried out a few of the writing exercises, which I found helpful.
Me being me, I kept dithering about it. I either didn’t have funds, or I’d get worried about having my work dissected and judged. Plus the added anxiety of having to Skype. I hate having my photo taken, or speaking on the phone. Having face to face video chat with another human being is a whole other level of awkward.
Then I was lucky enough to win a free coaching session. I took the opportunity to give it a go, hoping I would get a cure for my editing phobia, and improve my writing.
When it comes to writing, I love the adrenalin rush of the first draft. The process of extracting a story out of my brain and onto the page is exciting. The story seems to gain a life of it’s own, no matter how intricately I have planned and plotted. There’s always something new that comes out when I type or write the words onto the blank screen or page.
Where I falter is the editing process after. I reread my work and am overwhelmed by the huge task of extracting my story from the pile of cliché, rambling narrative passages, clunky dialogue and other myriad of bad writing.
I felt confident that I would get the best advice, having read my writing-buddy’s novel The Secret King: Lethao, DK Cassidy’s short story collection Spilt Milk edited by EJ, and EJ’s own novel A House of Light and Stone , all of which I loved. Spanning a broad range of genres from literary fiction, magical realism, to sci fi/ space opera.
With a pain not unlike extracting a rotten tooth. I pulled an old word.doc of a short story I’d written for an Open University Creative Writing course some eons ago, and a god-awful first draft from NaNoWriMo 2017 from my files. Feeling sorry to inflict the jumbled mess of words upon my poor coach for the hour.
I was relieved that Skype was just a voice call (saves on bandwidth), with text doc displayed in chat window, so I could see the editing work as we progressed.
EJ was so warm and approachable, putting me at ease immediately. It was lovely to finally put a voice to the person. Her passion for writing and helping others to create beautiful words shines through.
Discussing my first draft, and writing process with EJ, she immediately identified the main issues I was having. Working through a section of my work, she guided me through the edit step by step. I felt that I was given tools to hone my writing, and practical advice on how to approach editing tailored to my personal needs.
Bridge to Story has an art for extracting the essence of the work, to allow the author’s voice sing out from the page, rather than imposing her own style, or a prescriptive formula.
After studying creative writing in an academic environment, the Bridge to Story approach was refreshing. I now am feeling confident that I can chisel something worthwhile out of the detritus of my pile of first drafts, some of which I have been meaning to edit for near on a decade. I feel excited to start editing.